Weather

It was a cold,rainy,dark,cloudy fall evening. Every drop plowing down on the streets. At first it was just a little sprinkles coming down.This only lasted for about 15-20 minutes.
Then the clouds grew darker and darker. A huge wall of pouring raindrops came flashing in. Then came lighting, and thunder after that. It was so intense that it seemed like it would continue for hours. But it only lasted for about an hour.

The clouds drew and the sky started to get lighter as the sun revealed itself. Now there was not a cloud in the sky. Then the day returned to the way it was: A warm fall evening.

One thought on “Weather

  1. I like “as the sun revealed itself”… giving the sun control over its own movements :- )

    I also like that c0lon use at the end of your post!

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